ENJOY
By:Hayden
Freddy
Once upon a time there lived a snowman named Freddy. Freddy is a pretty cool guy if you ask me, anyway Freddy went for a walk with his snow dog, Bob. A group of kids walked up to him and said,“Hi.” So Freddy replied and the kids continued walking with Freddy and Bob. Eventually Freddy and the kids saw a basketball court and they challenged Freddy to a basketball game, ”Hey Freddy do you want to play a basketball game with us?” And he said yes. So the kids and Freddy played a basketball game. They had a fun time and when it was over they went back to Freddy’s igloo and watched the PSBA (Professional Snowman Basketball Association),and it just so happened to be it was the PSBA Championship was a good game and the kids loved it. Before the kids left they asked if they could meet up at the court the next day.
Bob (Freddy’s snow dog)
It’s really interesting that the snowman plays basketball. And then he gets more popular.
I like your story!
That is a very creative story. I would have never thought of a snowman basketball league.
I liked your post and how you had an NBA for snowmen and the snowman had a dog named BOB.
Good Job!1st blog story!
I like you story you put in good details. Also I like your picture choice of Freddy and Bob.
I really like the snow dog, I also like that it’s about a snowman playing baketball.
That is a very interest story
I like the short story. The names are good because they are simple, unlike Sr.Michel Baloni The Third
I like how you made the PSBA which was unique. Nice work!
Nice story! Very creative and interesting to read. Maybe try having a conflict, but otherwise a very nice story.
I love the story and all of the pictures.
This is a very cute story I love the art. I think it is cool that you made up PSBA.
Great job writing this!This needs a little bit detail about the characters appearance: but good job.
I really enjoyed your blog a lot! You did really good.Keep on working hard.
I like the story!You have good details but I think they could be more more descriptive so the reader has a better visual of what your story looks like:)
good blog over all like the joy in the blog but you need to give a conflict.
The story was short but sweet. I like the PBSA idea.
Haden you are very go at making microfiction Great job
I liked your story I l also liked PSBA
Good blog
I liked the story. What would happen if Freddy jumped?
Very interesting question.
explain???????
Great Job! I like the Pictures
I like how you made up the PSBA and Freddy and Bob play basketball nice work!
I like bob!
very nice/cool/interesting story i like bob
I loved how the kids were so nice and wanted to play with Freddy the next day I absolutely loved it.
I love all of the detail you put in the story.
I loved the poem that you wrote it made my day when i read this.
i didn’t write a poem but thanks
Good job! The story is very creative!
I like bob! I like all your cool ideas in your story!
Wow that is a great first blog post. I really like bob too!
I like how you included pictures and was very detailed
I love the “PSBA”. I also love how you call the dog “snow dog” and not just “dog”.
I like Bob!I like all your cool ideas in your story!
This blog was so interesting and i like that you incorporated the snowman playing basketball. I wish PSBA was real, it would be interesting. GREAT JOB !!!! :):):)
This is very creative blog! I like that you have a snowman basketball team.Good job!
I really liked the story of Freddy and Bob the snow dog it was really cool
WOW!!! I love the story and I love Freddy and Bob. Also I love the PSBA it sounds like so much fun!!!!:) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Good blog Freddy should be in the PSBA. I like Bob
that is a great idea Auryn
Great blog. Practice makes perfect and that’s exactly what you did! By the way I LOVE BOB
Your story is very interesting. I really like the snowmen.
Hayden liked the story 👍
the idea psba was great
gracias dude
Hey guys, I just wanted to say thank you for the positivity I see that you guys like bob and want me to add a conflict,so I will try to make a 2nd one with what you guys want.
Thank you,
Hayden
A very cute, imaginative story that gave me a good chuckle! Nice work Hayden!
Imaginative story; really liked the reference to the “PSBA”.
The PSBA is very creative. I like it.